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Update scene_tree.rst

Cleaning up redundant language.
bitbutter 6 lat temu
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getting_started/step_by_step/scene_tree.rst

@@ -6,18 +6,10 @@ SceneTree
 Introduction
 Introduction
 ------------
 ------------
 
 
-This is where things start getting abstract, but don't panic. There's
-not much more depth than this.
-
 In previous tutorials, everything revolved around the concept of
 In previous tutorials, everything revolved around the concept of
-nodes. Scenes are simply a collection of nodes. They become active once
+nodes. Scenes are collections of nodes. They become active once
 they enter the *scene tree*.
 they enter the *scene tree*.
 
 
-This concept deserves going into a little more detail. In fact, the
-scene system is not even a core component of Godot as it is possible to
-skip it and write a script (or C++ code) that talks directly to the
-servers, but making a game that way would be a lot of work.
-
 MainLoop
 MainLoop
 --------
 --------
 
 
@@ -46,7 +38,7 @@ game engine over a low level middleware.
 The scene system is the game engine, while the :ref:`OS <class_OS>`
 The scene system is the game engine, while the :ref:`OS <class_OS>`
 and servers are the low level API.
 and servers are the low level API.
 
 
-In any case, the scene system provides its own main loop to OS,
+The scene system provides its own main loop to OS,
 :ref:`SceneTree <class_SceneTree>`.
 :ref:`SceneTree <class_SceneTree>`.
 This is automatically instanced and set when running a scene, no need
 This is automatically instanced and set when running a scene, no need
 to do any extra work.
 to do any extra work.
@@ -64,7 +56,7 @@ important uses:
 
 
 When a node is part of the Scene Tree, the
 When a node is part of the Scene Tree, the
 :ref:`SceneTree <class_SceneTree>`
 :ref:`SceneTree <class_SceneTree>`
-singleton can be obtained by simply calling
+singleton can be obtained by calling
 :ref:`Node.get_tree() <class_Node_method_get_tree>`.
 :ref:`Node.get_tree() <class_Node_method_get_tree>`.
 
 
 Root viewport
 Root viewport
@@ -85,10 +77,10 @@ two different ways:
         GetTree().GetRoot(); // Access via scene main loop.
         GetTree().GetRoot(); // Access via scene main loop.
         GetNode("/root"); // Access via absolute path.
         GetNode("/root"); // Access via absolute path.
 
 
-This node contains the main viewport, anything that is a child of a
+This node contains the main viewport. Anything that is a child of a
 :ref:`Viewport <class_Viewport>`
 :ref:`Viewport <class_Viewport>`
 is drawn inside of it by default, so it makes sense that the top of all
 is drawn inside of it by default, so it makes sense that the top of all
-nodes is always a node of this type otherwise nothing would be seen!
+nodes is always a node of this type otherwise nothing would be seen.
 
 
 While other viewports can be created in the scene (for split-screen
 While other viewports can be created in the scene (for split-screen
 effects and such), this one is the only one that is never created by the
 effects and such), this one is the only one that is never created by the
@@ -106,16 +98,16 @@ _enter_tree() and _ready() callbacks (as well as _exit_tree()).
 .. image:: img/activescene.png
 .. image:: img/activescene.png
 
 
 When nodes enter the *Scene Tree*, they become active. They get access
 When nodes enter the *Scene Tree*, they become active. They get access
-to everything they need to process, get input, display 2D and 3D,
-notifications, play sound, groups, etc. When they are removed from the
-*scene tree*, they lose access.
+to everything they need to process, get input, display 2D and 3D visuals,
+receive and send notifications, play sounds, etc. When they are removed from the
+*scene tree*, they lose these abilities.
 
 
 Tree order
 Tree order
 ----------
 ----------
 
 
 Most node operations in Godot, such as drawing 2D, processing, or getting
 Most node operations in Godot, such as drawing 2D, processing, or getting
 notifications are done in tree order. This means that parents and
 notifications are done in tree order. This means that parents and
-siblings with a smaller rank in the tree order will get notified before
+siblings with a lower rank in the tree order will get notified before
 the current node.
 the current node.
 
 
 .. image:: img/toptobottom.png
 .. image:: img/toptobottom.png
@@ -181,7 +173,7 @@ function
 
 
 These are quick and useful ways to switch scenes but have the drawback
 These are quick and useful ways to switch scenes but have the drawback
 that the game will stall until the new scene is loaded and running. At
 that the game will stall until the new scene is loaded and running. At
-some point in your game, it may be desired to create proper loading
+some point in the development of your game, it may be preferable to create proper loading
 screens with progress bar, animated indicators or thread (background)
 screens with progress bar, animated indicators or thread (background)
-loading. This must be done manually using autoloads (see next chapter!)
-and :ref:`doc_background_loading`.
+loading. This must be done manually using autoloads (see next chapter)
+and :ref:`doc_background_loading`.