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SL doc: fix typos

Olle E. Johansson 13 年之前
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  1. 15 14
      modules/sl/README
  2. 2 2
      modules/sl/doc/functions.xml
  3. 9 9
      modules/sl/doc/sl.xml

+ 15 - 14
modules/sl/README

@@ -53,10 +53,10 @@ Daniel-Constantin Mierla
 
 
 1.1. Overview
 1.1. Overview
 
 
-   The SL module allows ser to act as a stateless UA server and generate
-   replies to SIP requests without keeping state. That is beneficial in
-   many scenarios, in which you wish not to burden server's memory and
-   scale well.
+   The SL module allows the SIP server to act as a stateless UA server and
+   generate replies to SIP requests without keeping state. That is
+   beneficial in many scenarios, in which you wish not to burden server's
+   memory and scale well.
 
 
    The SL module needs to filter ACKs sent after a local stateless reply
    The SL module needs to filter ACKs sent after a local stateless reply
    to an INVITE was generated. To recognize such ACKs, ser adds a special
    to an INVITE was generated. To recognize such ACKs, ser adds a special
@@ -64,17 +64,18 @@ Daniel-Constantin Mierla
    and if included, the ACKs are absorbed.
    and if included, the ACKs are absorbed.
 
 
    To speed up the filtering process, the module uses a timeout mechanism.
    To speed up the filtering process, the module uses a timeout mechanism.
-   When a reply is sent, a timer us set. As time as the timer is valid,
-   The incoming ACK requests will be checked using TO tag value Once the
-   timer expires, all the ACK are let through - a long time passed till it
-   sent a reply, so it does not expect any ACK that have to be blocked.
+   When a reply is sent, a timer us set. As long as the timer is valid,
+   the incoming ACK requests will be checked using TO tag value. Once the
+   timer expires, all the ACK messages are let through - a long time
+   passed till it sent a reply, so it does not expect any ACK that have to
+   be blocked.
 
 
    The ACK filtering may fail in some rare cases. If you think these
    The ACK filtering may fail in some rare cases. If you think these
-   matter to you, better use stateful processing (tm module) for INVITE
+   matter to you, better use stateful processing (TM module) for INVITE
    processing. Particularly, the problem happens when a UA sends an INVITE
    processing. Particularly, the problem happens when a UA sends an INVITE
-   which already has a to-tag in it (e.g., a re-INVITE) and SER want to
-   reply to it. Than, it will keep the current to-tag, which will be
-   mirrored in ACK. SER will not see its signature and forward the ACK
+   which already has a to-tag in it (e.g., a re-INVITE) and the server
+   want to reply to it. Then, it will keep the current to-tag, which will
+   be mirrored in ACK. SER will not see its signature and forward the ACK
    downstream. Caused harm is not bad--just a useless ACK is forwarded.
    downstream. Caused harm is not bad--just a useless ACK is forwarded.
 
 
 1.2. Parameters
 1.2. Parameters
@@ -134,8 +135,8 @@ sl_send_reply("404", "Not found");
 
 
    For the current request, a reply is sent back having the given code and
    For the current request, a reply is sent back having the given code and
    text reason. The reply is sent stateful or stateless, depending of the
    text reason. The reply is sent stateful or stateless, depending of the
-   TM module: if the transaction for current request is created, then the
-   reply is sent stateful, otherwise stateless.
+   TM module: if a transaction exists for the current request, then the
+   reply is sent statefully, otherwise stateless.
 
 
    Meaning of the parameters is as follows:
    Meaning of the parameters is as follows:
      * code - Return code.
      * code - Return code.

+ 2 - 2
modules/sl/doc/functions.xml

@@ -44,8 +44,8 @@ sl_send_reply("404", "Not found");
 		<para>
 		<para>
 		For the current request, a reply is sent back having the given code 
 		For the current request, a reply is sent back having the given code 
 		and text reason. The reply is sent stateful or stateless, depending of 
 		and text reason. The reply is sent stateful or stateless, depending of 
-		the TM module: if the transaction for current request is
-		created, then the reply is sent stateful, otherwise stateless.
+		the <acronym>TM</acronym> module: if a transaction exists for the current
+		request, then the reply is sent statefully, otherwise stateless.
 		</para>
 		</para>
 		<para>Meaning of the parameters is as follows:</para>
 		<para>Meaning of the parameters is as follows:</para>
 		<itemizedlist>
 		<itemizedlist>

+ 9 - 9
modules/sl/doc/sl.xml

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
     <section id="sl.overview">
     <section id="sl.overview">
 	<title>Overview</title>
 	<title>Overview</title>
 	<para>
 	<para>
-	    The <acronym>SL</acronym> module allows ser to act as a stateless
+	    The <acronym>SL</acronym> module allows the SIP server to act as a stateless
 	    UA server and generate replies to SIP requests without keeping
 	    UA server and generate replies to SIP requests without keeping
 	    state. That is beneficial in many scenarios, in which you wish not
 	    state. That is beneficial in many scenarios, in which you wish not
 	    to burden server's memory and scale well.
 	    to burden server's memory and scale well.
@@ -47,18 +47,18 @@
 	</para>
 	</para>
 	<para>
 	<para>
 	    To speed up the filtering process, the module uses a timeout
 	    To speed up the filtering process, the module uses a timeout
-	    mechanism. When a reply is sent, a timer us set. As time as the
-	    timer is valid, The incoming ACK requests will be checked using TO
-	    tag value Once the timer expires, all the ACK are let through - a
-	    long time passed till it sent a reply, so it does not expect any
-	    ACK that have to be blocked.
+	    mechanism. When a reply is sent, a timer us set. As long as the
+	    timer is valid, the incoming ACK requests will be checked using TO
+	    tag value. Once the timer expires, all the ACK messages are let 
+	    through - a long time passed till it sent a reply, so it does not 
+	    expect any ACK that have to be blocked.
 	</para>
 	</para>
 	<para>
 	<para>
 	    The ACK filtering may fail in some rare cases. If you think these
 	    The ACK filtering may fail in some rare cases. If you think these
-	    matter to you, better use stateful processing (tm module) for
-	    INVITE processing. Particularly, the problem happens when a UA
+	    matter to you, better use stateful processing (<acronym>TM</acronym> 
+	    module) for INVITE processing. Particularly, the problem happens when a UA
 	    sends an INVITE which already has a to-tag in it (e.g., a
 	    sends an INVITE which already has a to-tag in it (e.g., a
-	    re-INVITE) and SER want to reply to it. Than, it will keep the
+	    re-INVITE) and the server want to reply to it. Then, it will keep the
 	    current to-tag, which will be mirrored in ACK. SER will not see
 	    current to-tag, which will be mirrored in ACK. SER will not see
 	    its signature and forward the ACK downstream. Caused harm is not
 	    its signature and forward the ACK downstream. Caused harm is not
 	    bad--just a useless ACK is forwarded.
 	    bad--just a useless ACK is forwarded.