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 brief: This manual describes how to get Sony PlayStation access
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-# Sony PlayStation support
+# Sony PlayStation development
 
-The Defold Foundation is an approved PlayStation® Middleware provider and we are actively working on a PlayStation port of Defold. We expect this work to be completed by the end of Q3 2022.
+The Defold Foundation is an approved PlayStation® Middleware provider and we are actively working on a Sony PlayStation® port of Defold. We expect this work to be completed by the end of Q4 2022.
 
+Due to Sony licensing restrictions access to Defold versions with support for the Sony PlayStation® platform is not included in the standard version of Defold. In order to get access to versions of Defold with Sony PlayStation® support you need to become an approved game developer for Sony PlayStation®.
 
-# Sign up for PlayStation development
 
-Support for the PlayStation platform is not included in the standard version of Defold. In order to get access to PlayStation support in Defold you need to:
+## Registering as a Sony Playstation developer
 
-1. Become a Defold community donor with PlayStation access included in your membership tier, and
-2. Become a Sony PlayStation Partner.
+You can register as a game developer for Sony Playstation at the [Sony PlayStation® Partner page](https://register.playstation.net/):
 
+![](images/sony-playstation/sony-playstation-partner.png)
 
-## Become a Defold community donor with PlayStation® access
+When you have been approved by Sony you will get access to the Tools and Middleware page of the Sony PlayStation® Developer Portal where you can sign up for Defold access. When you register for Defold access we will get an email from Sony verifying you as a registered Sony PlayStation® developer.
 
-You become a Defold community donor on the [Defold community donation page](/community-donations/). You can become a donor with PlayStation access using either GitHub Sponsors or Patreon. Pay attention to the available tiers and select one which includes PlayStation access.
 
-![](images/nintendo-switch/register-defold.png)
+## Sony Playstation access in Defold
 
-## Register as Sony PlayStation Partner
+Once we have confirmed your status as an approved Sony PlayStation® developer we offer two tiers of Sony PlayStation® access in Defold:
 
-You register as a game developer for PlayStation at the [Sony PlayStation Partner page](https://register.playstation.net/):
+1. Standard access - Sony PlayStation® extension, build tools and support.
+2. Source code access - Sony PlayStation® extension, build tools and support AND source code access to the Sony PlayStation® specific parts of the Defold engine.
 
-![](images/sony-playstation/sony-playstation-partner.png)
 
-When you register you will get access to PlayStation developer tools and resources to create and publish games and applications for current Sony platforms.
+### Standard access
 
+Access to versions of Defold with Sony PlayStation® support is provided free of charge to all developers approved by Sony. As an approved developer we will provide you with access to:
 
-### Request Defold access
+* Extension with Sony PlayStation® specific API integrations.
+* [Command line tool](/manuals/bob) with support for bundling to the Sony PlayStation® platform.
+* Forum where you are able to get Sony PlayStation® specific support.
 
-When you have been approved by Sony you need to log in to the PlayStation Developer Portal and visit the Tools and Middleware page and sign up for Defold access. When you register for Defold access we will get an email from Sony verifying you as a registered PlayStation Partner. We will then proceed to verify you as a community donor with Sony PlayStation access included in your membership tier.
 
-When we have verified you as a donor with Sony PlayStation access we will provide you with the access to the following:
+### Source code access
 
-* Versions of the Defold editor and the Defold command line tools (bob.jar) with support for bundling to the PlayStation platform.
-* Private forum group where you are able to get PlayStation specific support.
-* PlayStation specific documentation
-* API reference to PlayStation specific engine functionality.
+Source code access is only provided to approved developer with an [active monthly community donation](/community-donations/) for an amount which gives you source code access.
+
+![](images/nintendo-switch/register-defold.png)
 
 
 ## FAQ
-:[Consoles FAQ](../shared/consoles-faq.md)
+:[Consoles FAQ](../shared/consoles-faq.md)