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Improve writing style in "Console support in Godot"

Hugo Locurcio 7 anos atrás
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-Console Support in Godot
+Console support in Godot
 ========================
 ========================
 
 
-Official Support
+Official support
 ----------------
 ----------------
 
 
-Godot does not officially support consoles (save for XBox One via UWP) currently.
+Godot currently does not officially support consoles
+(except the Xbox One using UWP).
 
 
 The reasons for this are:
 The reasons for this are:
 
 
-* To develop for consoles, one must be licensed as a company. Godot, as an open source project, does not have such a legal figure. 
-* Console SDKs are secret, and protected by non-disclosure agreements. Even if we could get access to them, we could not publish the code as open-source.
-* Consoles require specialized hardware to develop for, so regular individuals can't create games for them anyway.
+* To develop for consoles, one must be licensed as a company.
+  As an open source project, Godot does not have such a legal figure.
+* Console SDKs are secret and covered by non-disclosure agreements.
+  Even if we could get access to them, we could not publish
+  the platform-specific code under an open source license.
+* Consoles require specialized hardware to develop for, so regular individuals
+  can't create games for them anyway.
 
 
-This, however, does not mean you can't port your games to consoles. Quite the contrary.
+However, it is still possible to port your games to consoles thanks to
+services provided by third-party companies.
 
 
-Third-Party Support
---------------------
+Third-party support
+-------------------
 
 
-Console ports of Godot are offered via third party companies (which have
-ported Godot on their own) and offer porting and publishing services of
-your games to consoles.
+Console ports of Godot are offered by third-party companies (which have
+ported Godot on their own). These companies also offer publishing of
+your games to various consoles.
 
 
 Following is the list of providers:
 Following is the list of providers:
 
 
 * `Lone Wolf Technology <http://www.lonewolftechnology.com/>`_ offers
 * `Lone Wolf Technology <http://www.lonewolftechnology.com/>`_ offers
-  Switch, PS4 and XBox One porting and publishing of Godot games.
-
+  Switch, PS4 and Xbox One porting and publishing of Godot games.